09-22-2018, 08:20 AM
(09-20-2018, 05:10 PM)irukandji Wrote: I agree Juliette's flashback scenes were bad. I think flashback scenes can be helpful in furthering the story. In the case of Grimm, I would have liked to have seen more character observations.
LOL, I guess you must have missed the supermarket scene where Juliette tells Nick she was just using her previous BF for sex.
The scene when she tells the gang how her grandmother was trying to scare her, as a teen, from ending up in the back seats of teenage boy's cars.
You also missed the scene when Alicia tells Nick about her many (cough) "admirers" she had in her dorm during her college days.
Add in how she conducted herself with Sean and Kenneth while she still had an emotional attachment to Nick. It kinda's <--(slang word so I don't get yelled at for miss-spelling) paints a concise portrait of your darling character, Juliette.
She is a whorish slut, trollop, hoe, fast gal and a bitch. Well, at least, promiscuous, by my standards. Feel free to add a few more adjectives.
You know you are OLD, when you see the Slide Ruler you used in college selling in an ANTIQUE SHOP!!