04-08-2017, 05:29 PM
(04-08-2017, 02:56 PM)Hexenadler Wrote: Guys...you've all done your best to provide constructive criticism, and I've done my best to explain why I'm sticking by my guns. I think the story works as it is, and I didn't commit any kind of gaffe the official Grimm writing staff haven't already.Hi Hex,
Stick to your guns. You wrote a good story.
If I had such skill I would only change that Trubel killed Juliette and HW performed a Frankenstein on her carcass. For a Grimm Fable that is a minor issue. Don't change a thing.
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