06-23-2016, 05:26 AM
Chapter 1
The battle had ended there were corpses lying all over the battlefield. One body , half his face blown off by a musket ball, was starting to crawl through grass, he crawled around 2 metres until he gasped a long painful breath. Just as he finished his breath he saw a shadow looming over his head.
He tried to move his head to see who, or what it was but attackers knee went crashing into his back stopping him from moving any body part at all. The person bent don't and whispered into his ear "Dolor tuus permanebit".
It was a soft women's voice. What followed the women's voice was anything but soft. The heel of a boot had crashed down onto the base of his skull and he died.
It's was the first bit of a book in writing inspired by Grimm
What do you think
The battle had ended there were corpses lying all over the battlefield. One body , half his face blown off by a musket ball, was starting to crawl through grass, he crawled around 2 metres until he gasped a long painful breath. Just as he finished his breath he saw a shadow looming over his head.
He tried to move his head to see who, or what it was but attackers knee went crashing into his back stopping him from moving any body part at all. The person bent don't and whispered into his ear "Dolor tuus permanebit".
It was a soft women's voice. What followed the women's voice was anything but soft. The heel of a boot had crashed down onto the base of his skull and he died.
It's was the first bit of a book in writing inspired by Grimm
What do you think