08-18-2017, 09:33 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-18-2017, 09:43 AM by Hexenadler.)
(08-18-2017, 02:07 AM)dicappatore Wrote:(08-17-2017, 04:36 PM)Hexenadler Wrote: Here's a revised edition of the same story, with a few passages rewritten to appease critics who felt Nick was too much of a wimp.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12608902/1/Wine-Lasagna
I guess what you wrote here might be a chapter for a TV Show called, “Juliette, The Making of a Hexenbiest Bitch”, or, “The Pussy-Fication of a Born Loosing Grimm”, with maybe, if lucky, would get one or two hundred thousand feminist viewers. This is a series called “Grimm”, so unless you make Juliette into a Grimm instead of what you wrote the show would have been cancelled after a few chapters like this one.
I take this would have been a chapter toward the end of season 4. If the plot would have been the same in your re-write to this point in the storyline, after she exposes her Hex to Nick, I don’t see any change in the viewership to this point.
If you were part of the writing staff from the beginning and had the influence to treat men with the same disdain as you have shown in this chapter. I doubt the show would have made it off the ground. The pilot would have been rejected.
What a nasty, bitter, arrogant, sneering creature you are, to be so cocksure about what would or wouldn't work on television. Considering the actual television writers basically got away with Nick hunkering down with his former rapist, I'm having a hard time seeing how my pathetic little fan-scenario is any less reprehensible.
This isn't about turning men into pussies. I think that particular criticism speaks of your own deep-seated insecurity about your personal worth as a man, which is obviously below zero. THIS Nick isn't a doormat, although I can see why your narrow expectations of everything a man should be would see him in that light. He's merely quiet and observant, which I'm sure is the complete opposite of the kind of swaggering brute you idolize. He still has limits when it comes to his relationship with Juliette, and if you had bothered to pay enough attention, you would have picked up on them. But the fact you're getting THIS worked up over an irreverent piece of fanfiction indicates you don't really pay attention to any book, TV show, or movie that doesn't already agree with your patriarchal view of the universe.
Quote:Your Quote; “Juliette quickly closes the door to her soul before Nick could see it. [“If you start crying, I’ll sleep with Renard again and send you photos of our honeymoonin Bermuda”]’. Really?
This is an example of Juliette's "Hexenbiestiness" coming to the fore. It's a smart-aleck remark used to conceal a moment of vulnerability on her part. Nick sees right through it. You can't.
Quote:Maybe in your walks in life have come across men that would put up with this kind of Bull Shit, I know I have met one or two. But these types of ass-wipe men are very few in existence. Maybe a bit more in average in places like NYC, LA and some of the other major population centers around the world. If one did manage to be born as a Grimm he would have been man enough to have survived as a one. You see, Men are born with “Balls”. If in life, they don’t show any “Balls”. Not many of those men would survive to reproduce.
I know you might not like to hear this. But the reality is. If the majority of men existed as the Nick you have described in this chapter. Mankind would have been obliterated off the face of the Earth from the beginning. IMO!
Wow. You really ARE insecure about something, aren't you? Either men are psychotic hardasses who beat their wives to a bloody pulp over a cold breakfast, or they're complete snowflakes. This really isn't the kind of place to find the help you need, though. You should try here:
http://www.menshealth.com/health/erectil...tion-drugs
On a side note: If we were to meet face-to-face, I would also swiftly kick you in the same testicles you worship so fervently. Is THAT masculine enough for you, asshole?
Quote:P.S. One additional note. In all your post in the “Fan Creation” threads, you seem to have one constant and similar theme about the Nick/Juliette relationship. This idea of Juliette, as a Hexenbiest is always telling/demanding that she can have any sexual partners at any time she feels like it. As for Nick, he is not allow the freedom to do the same, nor complain about it. If he does, either complain or cheat? Promises of bad Hexenbiest repercussions will follow, guaranteed.
PAY. ATTENTION. "Hexenette" might threaten Nick with sexual partners, but she never actually does it. Nick is savvy enough to see right through her threats. This story is about a love that transcends female bitchiness or male thuggishness, despite the best efforts of the former and your personal desire for the latter. You're a hateful little person whose opinion has no worth to me. THESE are the kind of "manly men" you idolize, whether you fully realize it or not:
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/C5_YUx-UoAAtEFg.jpg
Enjoy your next MGTOW meeting, dicappatore, because we're done here.