08-18-2017, 02:07 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-18-2017, 05:48 AM by dicappatore.)
(08-17-2017, 04:36 PM)Hexenadler Wrote: Here's a revised edition of the same story, with a few passages rewritten to appease critics who felt Nick was too much of a wimp.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12608902/1/Wine-Lasagna
I guess what you wrote here might be a chapter for a TV Show called, “Juliette, The Making of a Hexenbiest Bitch”, or, “The Pussy-Fication of a Born Loosing Grimm”, with maybe, if lucky, would get one or two hundred thousand feminist viewers. This is a series called “Grimm”, so unless you make Juliette into a Grimm instead of what you wrote the show would have been cancelled after a few chapters like this one.
I take this would have been a chapter toward the end of season 4. If the plot would have been the same in your re-write to this point in the storyline, after she exposes her Hex to Nick, I don’t see any change in the viewership to this point.
If you were part of the writing staff from the beginning and had the influence to treat men with the same disdain as you have shown in this chapter. I doubt the show would have made it off the ground. The pilot would have been rejected.
Your Quote; “Juliette quickly closes the door to her soul before Nick could see it. [“If you start crying, I’ll sleep with Renard again and send you photos of our honeymoonin Bermuda”]’. Really?
Maybe in your walks in life have come across men that would put up with this kind of Bull Shit, I know I have met one or two. But these types of ass-wipe men are very few in existence. Maybe a bit more in average in places like NYC, LA and some of the other major population centers around the world. If one did manage to be born as a Grimm he would have been man enough to have survived as a one. You see, Men are born with “Balls”. If in life, they don’t show any “Balls”. Not many of those men would survive to reproduce.
I know you might not like to hear this. But the reality is. If the majority of men existed as the Nick you have described in this chapter. Mankind would have been obliterated off the face of the Earth from the beginning. IMO!
P.S. One additional note. In all your post in the “Fan Creation” threads, you seem to have one constant and similar theme about the Nick/Juliette relationship. This idea of Juliette, as a Hexenbiest is always telling/demanding that she can have any sexual partners at any time she feels like it. As for Nick, he is not allow the freedom to do the same, nor complain about it. If he does, either complain or cheat? Promises of bad Hexenbiest repercussions will follow, guaranteed.
Well this is where we seem to come to an understanding. I have posted in many threads about the tid-bits we get in various seasons and episodes of Juliette’s past promiscuous behavior. Which makes me conclude the Hexenbiest in her, rereleased the slut, that was being suppressed in her, during the first three and a half seasons of the Grimm saga. Nice to see someone else, in-directly, come to the same conclusion about her.
You know you are OLD, when you see the Slide Ruler you used in college selling in an ANTIQUE SHOP!!